cRIME tO rHYME

Hey, First of all thanks for taking the time to check this out. This blog is just about random thoughts that i weaved into poetry ,at least that’s my way of putting it. Random thoughts or maybe even bursts of feelings, and no THESE ARE NOT BASED ON PERSONAL EXPERIENCE ...nevertheless i hope you like it...

The Yellow One...

Thinking of you makes me hungry,
and im not sure why...

Do i miss those amazing muffins you make,
or was it your heart that was as sweet as cake...

Do i miss your choclates that i preffered to cocaine,
Or was it the way you kissed away my pain....

Do i miss the cheeese cake and Ice cream,
Or your love that completed my dream...

Was it that brilliant banaana split,
Or the way you amused me with your wit...

Was it the choaclalte moouse,
or the way your company set me loose...

My fridge when opened looks like an empty desert,
Without your Lakes of Chocalate,
Plains of Black forest,
and clouds of whipped cream...

But that does't matter anymore
Its not your deserts i miss,
Its the way you cooked me bliss...

And at the moment salty realisation hits me,
Its not my stomach thats hungry,
its my heart...

3 comments:

Akash June 2, 2009 at 8:25 AM  

I think this one can be improved...

sinth June 3, 2009 at 9:22 AM  

dude after this, our score is something like 15:1 !
but i like the sentence "and the moment salty realisation hits me"

John Isaiah June 6, 2009 at 12:11 AM  

seriously..im lost. is the yellow one a person?a girl?your comparing a girl to food?normally i think that's kinda insulting to girls..but then again what do i know...and whats with the weird spelling...and you dont even do cocaine???

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